Storm in the distance

Discussion in 'Scenic, Architecture, and Travel' started by Jazzer, Aug 4, 2013.

  1. Jazzer

    Jazzer TalkEmount Veteran

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    Nov 6, 2012
    New York
    Larry
    Was out at a park yesterday and this scene caught my eye. I'm not sure about the composition.
    Comments/thoughts on any aspect appreciated.

    DSC01248 (1).
     
  2. NickCyprus

    NickCyprus Super Moderator

    Oct 11, 2012
    Cyprus
    Nick
    I like it ;)

    I would definately crop out the tree on the right and some other colour adjustments while on post processing

    Good work
     
  3. TonyTurley

    TonyTurley TalkEmount Hall of Famer

    Apr 24, 2013
    West Virginia, USA
    That's funny, I was thinking I would have liked to have seen a bit more of the tree, maybe move to the right a bit. Still, a decent view.

    Tony
     
  4. -et-

    -et- TalkEmount Veteran

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    Jan 26, 2013
    Southern California
    Tom
    Personally, I agree with Nick - and with Tony. :eek:

    Seriously, I think that either of those options would be attractive modifications to this image.

    - Tom -
     
  5. NickCyprus

    NickCyprus Super Moderator

    Oct 11, 2012
    Cyprus
    Nick
    Exactly :D
     
  6. claude

    claude TalkEmount Top Veteran

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    Jan 13, 2013
    Ottawa Canada
    I think it boils down to either crop tree out or have alot more tree. Considering the tough lighting there it's a pretty good shot regardless.
     
  7. Jazzer

    Jazzer TalkEmount Veteran

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    Nov 6, 2012
    New York
    Larry
    Thanks everyone. I guess I will crop the tree because I don't have anymore to include. I actually think it adds a little more interest to the image, but I agree I should have gotten more of it.
     
  8. Jazzer

    Jazzer TalkEmount Veteran

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    Nov 6, 2012
    New York
    Larry
    Better? Worse? I cropped out the tree and played around a little with definition saturation and vibrancy.

    DSC01248.
     
  9. NickCyprus

    NickCyprus Super Moderator

    Oct 11, 2012
    Cyprus
    Nick
    :eek: Wow!!! Much better :thumbup:
    I like the colour adjustments - it gives a whole new different meaning to the shot ;)
     
  10. TonyTurley

    TonyTurley TalkEmount Hall of Famer

    Apr 24, 2013
    West Virginia, USA
    Very nice.
     
  11. davect01

    davect01 Super Moderator

    Aug 20, 2011
    Fountain Hills, AZ
    Dave
    Agree!
     
  12. Jazzer

    Jazzer TalkEmount Veteran

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    Nov 6, 2012
    New York
    Larry
    Thanks guys!