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'Homeless Hero' - narrative web series

Discussion in 'Video to Share' started by bmg123, May 24, 2013.

  1. bmg123

    bmg123 TalkEmount Veteran

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    Jan 15, 2013
    England, UK
    Hello everyone! A friend and I created this little project a while back on a piece of scrap paper, and today we filmed and I took it back and edited it, then managed to upload it all in one day!
    This is (for lack of a better name) 'Homeless Hero', the first in what I hope to be a fun long-running series of short episodes. I'd like your thoughts on mainly the shots, as this was a very quickly made short project to gauge interest, and so I realise there are several problems.

    So yeah, I'd like criticism on the shot structure and anything else you spot, does the story overall make sense? Be as harsh as you like!

    Anyway, enough of my ramble, enjoy! (Filmed all on the NEX-7, I know my focus pulls suck!)

    [video=youtube_share;BdcITzLBjxU]http://youtu.be/BdcITzLBjxU[/video]
     
  2. bmg123

    bmg123 TalkEmount Veteran

    310
    Jan 15, 2013
    England, UK
    New episode!

    [video=youtube_share;NZGcI1GbP30]http://youtu.be/NZGcI1GbP30[/video]